Review Detail of LMoodie in The First Forefather

Shameless review from the author here. This is my first time writing, and I wanted to give a heads up about what's to come in the story, along with my general ideas. The mc is from unknown origins, who quickly shows his talent. The story doesn't start off with him being the adoptive child to a family that hates him, but with internal conflict, where he feels love and hate. He will then rise and fall, but continue to carry his family up to a higher status. His personality will change through different experiences, while he meets friends and enemies. This is not a harem novel, but I will do my best with the romance aspect that I have in mind. While he will meet stronger talents, they will not continue to appear in the same age with stronger cultivation. The higher realms require knowledge and understanding, which generally comes with age. Please tell me your thoughts and I will try to continue writing.