Review Detail of TheSpiderNextDoor in Steel Legion

This is good! I usually enjoy stories from this genre, and your novel is truly a thrill to read. If I had to say something slightly critical, it would be that you have some small typos, but these could be fixed easily. Mostly in chapter three, an example is, "I'm a bit drowsy of last night's watch" and "He is expert in jungle warfare and survival." As I said earlier, these are small typos and ones that I would normally skim over when reading online. I really hope this didn't come off as too severe though, because I truly enjoyed reading your novel so far. Keep up the good work!