Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Sand-Man

Already interested..... suggestion..OP MC...Kills evil dudes[ pls ]..no ***** MC..One man army...ie: no ***** parker... Romance and fluff [not jean grey or MJ or felicity..no offense but they are over done and kinda slutty..I mean take MJ..she abandoned peter and choose osborn because of his wealth and other ****..basically add some bash..[why not..more interesting..bash the **** out and no redemption..make em regret their decisions..and MC hates them--yes bash them..muhahaha] Cold MC..no tragic / separation or cheating type ****..try to keep it happy and fluff GOOD LUCK AND GOOD SHOW