Let me start by saying this is one of the most infuriating books I've ever read. I'm sure that the author won't see this review because this is a translated novel but I still feel its best to warn future readers. 1. the dragging: the story is extended unreasonably by the author. I won't blame whoever unfairly, it's mostly because of webnovel's system of encouraging longer stories. authors do this in order to gain more money but by God this is ridiculously slow. 2. the kids: the synopsis never mentioned kids or I would have never clicked on this book. I detest books that make kids props. toddlers need their mom and their dad so forgive me but I'm going to judge the fl for being a bad mother. secondly, men are not sperm donors. Even as a woman it's intensly irritating for me to read books in which the woman just decided to hide their kids from the father. Does he not have the right to know his kids just because he's a man? Does the kids not have the right to know their father? Next is the webnovel trope of unrealistic intelligent toddlers. How much disbelief am I supposed to suspend in order to logically believe that 4 year olds are so intelligent? 3. the FL: none of her reasoning make sense which is such a shame because she's supposed to be so intelligent. First she insults the ml, then she runs away which begins the while cat and mouse race. because the ml chased her down she immediately concluded that he will take her kids away. she never once tried to find out about him and she denied both him and her kids for 4 years. then she agrees to a contract marriage with him, all this while misunderstanding compound. 4. The premise of the story: I stopped seriously reading around 100 chapters and skimmed the book up to chapter 800. the ml still hasn't discovered that he has kids. the fl is still hiding a lot of secrets and there's still investigating her identity. 800 chapters.... Well, I have plenty more to say but that would mean wasting more time on this
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