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Review Detail of David_Drake in Yu-Gi-Oh! ZD: Rise of the Dragons (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Fanfiction)

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The fic has a good plot and great battles. However, the MC is naive and his deck never loses. He draws his cards perfectly at clutch situations and the side characters are non existent at times. Honestly I dropped this story at cp 19 after the MC decides to not off his opponent and instead saved the guy and revealed his secrets. (All because he made a promise with an anime character who hasn't went through puberty.) This isn't the first time he has made questionable decisions and I know there is more to follow if I continued reading. For this reason only, I decided to not continue with this fic. In the end it was more of a personal bias than the author's writing. But I did notice the nonexistent descriptions of monster, characters, attacks and places. Making it a pain to google every single thing to know what I should be visualizing. I'd rate this fic a 3.7/5.

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Yu-Gi-Oh! ZD: Rise of the Dragons (A Yu-Gi-Oh! Fanfiction)

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