Review Detail of The_Devil_Knocks in Vampire Knight Fanfiction ❤

Item: Vampire Knight Fanfiction ❤
Rating: 2.8

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I couldn't continue reading due to the grammar and punctuation issues. The story didn't have a natural flow and the author failed to set up a proper jumping off point due to this being a continuation of the story.

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YukiKuran

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YukiKuranAuthorYukiKuran

I am sorry for the inconvenience of making mistakes since I am new at this. I will take into account of the mistakes I have made so thank you for the advice. I will make sure to improve the points you have made.

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