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Zonion
ZonionLv145yr
2020-01-14 21:58

First set of review, as I haven't read all of the chapters expect another one once chapter 15 or 20 is out. Well here we go. Personally I didn't really expect much from this story. It didn't really grab my attention, this is mainly due to my dislike towards the character and their idiocy. Not only that but the premise of the main character being trained as a with yet not having the Sith qualities that is expected of a Sith. My biggest problem is that the main character is a... FURRY.

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NaphtaIi
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a furry? lmao. Well, I'm really not that great of a writer, I just started out...and yea the character is basically an idiot because I wanted to relate to him so much but I think I took it overboard. Although he has certain qualities of a sith: for example, he has a red necklace that shows what he has gone through to have sith qualities, anger, hate and all those dark factors. It's not great but I like the story but thank you so much for the review it helps a lot!

NaphtaIi
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But it's been rewritten so hopefully it's way better!

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