Review Detail of BlaccLotus in His Beautiful Mother in Law

Item: His Beautiful Mother in Law
Rating: 5

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BlaccLotusAuthor4yrBlaccLotus

I'll edit previous chapter to correct grammar and such to make it more readable. But i don't know my grammar will be better or not, because i've been learning english by myself, but i'll try my best to improve. This is my first time writing a story, so i hope i won't make too many mistake.

His Beautiful Mother in Law

BlaccLotus

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akshay22Lv5akshay22

Great author ur storyline provides us with a good taste of culture pls continue writing it

4yr

akshay22Lv5akshay22

Thanks I appreciate your efforts and gesture🤩🤩🤩🤩

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4yr

SweetusweetyLv4Sweetusweety

Try to make your tense perfect. Update before, you read it three time. Clear the background details. And positions GOOD LUCK👌😘

4yr

LM_Kin_9017Lv3LM_Kin_9017

Hoping for a u will answer me Will de fiance leave if she finds out she is been cheated upon

3yr

BlaccLotusAuthorBlaccLotus

She was so devastated, but he wont let her leave him.

LM_Kin_9017:Hoping for a u will answer me Will de fiance leave if she finds out she is been cheated upon

3yr