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2020-04-09 00:40

First of all it is a satisfying story. The sex scene is imaginative. The characters are also good for me. The background of every sex scene so far is not always the same because it is too boring if it is always in the same place. That's all I want to say and this is may first time to write a review in R-18 novel so please don't blame me if there's some wrong grammar in my review. And also I enjoyed reading this novel up to last chapter update.

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Author's Note: Important to read. What does this novel have? - Male lead is insanely handsome and charming beyond description. - He's prince charming and complete full marks of every woman's dream man. - An inborn casanova and a mere smile of his would send women flinging their panties off for him. - A type of man that makes women sexually uncomfortable as they would get their panties wet and moist because of his mere presence. - Casanova he might look like, but actually he's a quite devoted and loyal man. - Four extremely beautiful woman as the Female lead, all of them have their own story. - The story is about a warm and sweet romance between ML and FLs, and do expect a drama between them. - ML isn't your typical cold CEO who can rule the Nation, he's warm and every woman's prince charming. - ML has two completely different personalities. - Maybe there'll be action in the future. - No INFIDELITY for FLs and ML (well, for the fact that ML is inborn casanova he's quite loyal as he'll only love the FLs) P.S - It's a romance story, well yes the early chapters made it looks like R-18 book, but the story will slowly shifts into romance as the story progress. - The writing style and grammar on the early chapters is a bit unbearable but it gets more readable from chapter 16, and I hope for it to get better as the story progress. - English is my third language so if you're a grammar nazi, this is not for you. It's about the story but I do hope for me to improve so I can tell the story better. How many chapters there would be? - At the moment, I'm planning to complete the story around 200 chapters. May change depending on the scene list and the outline. What's the release rate for this book? - At the moment is 1-3 chapters per two week. As much as want to updates more but I can't because I'm really slow at writing like a mad snail. Will this book get dropped in the future? - I will try my best to complete this book and I have no plan to drop this book because this book itself is my dream story. More like a fulfilling story for me, my ideal ML and FLs. - Well life itself is full of something unexpected, and maybe I'll disappeared along the way for a short moment but do expect for me to comeback because believe me I'm myself really want to see the ending of this book. - If you ask me what is my favorite book my answer is "His Genius Wife is Superstar" by ArriaCross, and the "Outline" of "His Beautiful Mother in Law" as the second. Lol that so shameless of me but I do really love the outline story of this book. So I really want to see the ending of this book. Pls. refrain from rude and mean comments, of course constructive criticism/critique and meaningful feedback are welcome. But don't be too harsh because this is my first time on writing and this shameless me have a fragile heart. You can drop a comment if you have a question to ask to me.

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