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The_week
The_weekLv114yr
2020-03-11 20:42

Read the machine translation after reading first 50 chapters on webnovel. The book is cool for the first few chapters, about "200", after which it becomes about greed, self importance and bias. Am referring to the character here, of the main lead. So, from a personal choice I can only say the first part was cool, felt a little bit like a "lord of mysteries" kind of literary exploration but after which it's just crap, repulsive and predictable. It the usual without greed you won't progress, without being childish it you are insecure, without having a distorted view of the world, the world is not suitable for you. [Also noted as : greed, self-importance and bias]. As for why the rating is 4 stars, it truly is 4 stars despite being a crap novel, actually 3 and a half stars but there is no half star, so there you have it.

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Forbidsin
ForbidsinLv12

Can you link the machine translation

The_week
The_weekLv11

http://***.linyuanxingxs.com/1/1660/ [Google translate on chrome]

ThyUnknownSaint
ThyUnknownSaintLv11

Really...? What a disappointed. It started off pretty badass too so I can’t help but feel bitter.

Eliflockan
EliflockanLv10

Thanks

Valven
ValvenLv6

Can’t agree with you, “Without greed you can’t progress” is another term for “Without greed there would be no passion and ambition”. Even if there is greed, it can be explored well and not so straightforward like “I want what he has.”

t650825t
t650825tLv5

Greed is important

Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15

It is like the Code of the Sith: Peace is a lie. 。There is only passion. 。Through passion I gain strength. 。Through strength I gain power. 。Through power I gain victory. 。Through victory my chains are broken. 。The Force shall set me free!

Valven:Can’t agree with you, “Without greed you can’t progress” is another term for “Without greed there would be no passion and ambition”. Even if there is greed, it can be explored well and not so straightforward like “I want what he has.”
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