First of all congrats to the author for finishing his other novel. It's a great story so for those who haven't seen it, Go read it, I assure you it's worth your time👍👍👍 Now my opinion for this novel is that it's worth reading. In the first place Stories that involve Detective Conan, Magic Kaito and Lupin the 3rd are really rare especially here in webnovel so that's a plus if you are looking for new ideas to read. The chapters themselves are not too short but it's not too long either, but that's still fine since the author compensates it with a high quality chapter. Now the MC's situation of not knowing much about what his power and origin is, makes it fresh. There is a huge possibility to come up with and it's not just limited with a single world but with also different verse. And as for the author's worry of his grammar and spelling. I think it's good, you don't have to worry much about it, as long as you try to keep the words simple but at the same time accurate, don't keep repeating the same sentence or word over and over, there might be chances where there is misspellings but as long as you don't do it much, you'll be fine. Anyhow I look forward to the development of this story and I expect that this will be as good or even better than your last novel. Keep up the good work and thank you for your hard work! P.S I came here because I saw the lolicon tag! All hail lolis!!😎😎😎
PandaWanKenobi
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LIKEMy brothers! I see in your eyes the same fear that would take the heart of me! A day may come, when the courage of FBI succeeds when we forsake our friends and break all bonds of Brotherhood, but it is not this day! An hour of cuteness and shattered hearts when the age of lolis comes crashing down! But it is not this day! This day we fight! By all that you hold dear on this good earth, I bid you, stand, men of Lolis!
PandaWanKenobi:All hail lolicons! P.S we have Legal Loli here....so it is not pedophilia, but we might have one because Ayumi....@-@ Loli is justice!!
Wriothesley_Main: My brothers! I see in your eyes the same fear that would take the heart of me! A day may come, when the courage of FBI succeeds when we forsake our friends and break all bonds of Brotherhood, but it is not this day! An hour of cuteness and shattered hearts when the age of lolis comes crashing down! But it is not this day! This day we fight! By all that you hold dear on this good earth, I bid you, stand, men of Lolis!