Review Detail of Lovereading88 in Tensei Slime: White Fox Reincarnation

To be updated over time. I would like to point out that it is not a negative review, I am sure that it will improve over time, simply vote for all the factors that the site itself recommends. Writing Quality: 3/5. I was disturbed by the fact of starting the work in a way and then changing the way of writing towards the last chapters. Certainly, there has been an improvement over the beginning, which I hope remains on these levels. Stability of Updates: 4/5. True, no chapters will come out quickly, but he clearly said "No schedule release." So I don't understand the complaints, of course I don't put the five stars myself since short or long periods can pass between one chapter and another. However, it's still something that I accepted after I started reading the work. Story Development: 3/5. Too linear compared to the main story. Of course, the addition of the protagonist will certainly vary something, and I appreciated the fact that it is revealed that it comes from the earth and does not hide like most works, something that I consider innovative. Character Design: 1/5. Ok it's a fan fiction, the name says it all, it's normal to use the characters from the main story, but someone new would be appreciated. The vote is one because even the protagonist is the copy of Rimuru but in another beast. This, plus the absence of new characters are the weak point of the fiction. World Background: 2/5. Like above. However, I have faith in the new narrative arc, it has the premises to create something new. This is because the world of Tensura is not only what they have shown.