Review Detail of Sandy_Jefferson in Dance Between Mortals and Immortals

Lovely. This writer writes like he had a story arch pre-planned with character profiles.👥 The story flows well and the side characters are 3-dimensional. Aside from a few obvious grammatical errors such as run on sentences🙈. This is very very well written. However, I'm still waiting to see how the reincarnation aspect comes to play. Might be the only weak link in this story, seems unnecessary. We shall see. I'm happy to overlook it due to quality of the writing.👍