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2021-03-13 12:14

MC IS A ZOMBIE LAME! Too be fair I only read two chapters but when I immures myself in a story I want to relate to the MC and a zombie wont do...the only kinda undead I can tolerate for an MC is a vampire due to being able to assimilate with humans...not gonna lie I am an undead-racist. It is a real shame too cuz I love the novels extra.....

In The Novel I'm Just Dead

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A_Canadian
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It's rough, It needs polishing, only. With A LOT Of Polish. No detail for where anything is, the whole thing is just a bit too 'Floaty' Mc is an emotionless plot tool who has a bit too perfect memory. It starts off and he gets an insanely overpowered ability right off the bat. Dialogue is butchered and mixed with random first person bit. Past and present tense are all kinds of miffed. One day, one day I'll be a decent writer. Just not any day soon...

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You know what I didn't read it and probably won't from your suggestion Author-San but I'll give it a five star for the lols and to say hi in a unnatural way Lol

4yr
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