Review Detail of Darkstel in What It takes to be a Jedi

As I have already noted in the comments under the first chapter, the story is at a high level. The text, the relationship between the main character and his former love is very intriguing and romantic, plus the fact that in addition this story is marked as a harem is no less intriguing, even the presence of a non-canonical factor like a slightly older Anakin and the presence of a younger sister does not spoil the perception of the story (like a lot of slag read by other writers), but adds intrigue.