To love the heartless is so rich in potential, only it is sometimes affected by some typos. Would also love to have a clear formatting for the headings, as it tends to be confusing. But if you get past these, you can focus on the enjoyment of the read,as the plot is intriguing enough to make you want for more. I only hope new chapters are published faster, especially for those like me who reads fast. Overall, great work!
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thank you for the feeback! I really needed this! I'll start working on everything you've said immediately! Thank you again! This means a lot to me! The typos are going to be fixed asap. I go over it, but sometimes my eyes aren't enough. I'm working on contacting my old editor by the next five chapters.