Review Detail of Kamatis in The Legend of the Seven Crystals - The One Crystal

Sorry for the late review! I saw you posted at the forum, so you want to trade reviews, right? Here, it is! I'm actually quiet envious on your writing style and consistent grammar. My grammar is already bad enough so I can't judge you on the grammar. As per the story, it has some Filipino elements such as tikbalang and engkanto. I'm guessing that your a Filipino, am I right?(or maybe a writer who decided to use Filipino Mythology as your reference?) Since I'm a Filipino, I can't help but laugh. Because It's my first-time encountering something like that. All in all, the story is good and nice. I suggest that you make some humor sometimes on your story. Having a funny concept even though it's not a comedy story will make your writing flexible. If you watched the Death Note series, it has a very dark and heavy theme, yet it pulls off jokes sometimes. But only sometimes, because your story is a heavy-themed one. If your always joking, the heavy story will be gone and it will become a lighthearted one. That's all! Thank you for reading!