Review Detail of The_Cheese in The Legend of the Seven Crystals - The One Crystal

First of all, World Background. You have express a fully detailed background of your novel. You also show the actions of the Characters, Making a great image for your readers to imagine the scenario. Secondly, Writing Quality. You have exceed the expectations as a writer, I see no spelling errors, and fully utilized the words effectively Third, Story Development. So far the story seems too much on action side but overall an okay to read. Need to have a sort of balance between commentary and actions, but other readers would disagree with me. Lastly, Stability of Updates. This just means, if you update regularly or not. For an example, If you update chapters daily 5 stars. If you update 2 chapters in one day and not upload a chapter the next day 5 stars. This just means you have to have balance between chapters. This is an Honest review. Post Your own Novels on the Webnovel Forums. *Please note this review will subject to change. ~ The_Cheese