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Review Detail of Flat_Moon in Reincarnated as a dragon egg in DxD with a Fate System!

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Flat_Moon
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I have 3 problems I'd like to voice not just about this novel but a common problem I've seen in other novels 1• If you are reincarnating an adult into a child with all its memories then he should have other qualities that resemble adult that isn't just being perverted. 2• To all authors thinking of writing status/system novels stop showing the status for every little improvement. Just give a small paragraph of the improvement and get back to the story. No one wants a chapter with the Status taking up all of the chapters. Give me a status page when there has been a great achievement. 3• Stop pasting information from the Internet cause it's an unnecessary amount, dumb it down to your own words so that we don't have just a huge chapter of information instead of actual story development.

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Reincarnated as a dragon egg in DxD with a Fate System!

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