Writing Quality - 3 stars, Good writing in some chapters but Decent writing for the whole book. Stability of Updates - 1 star, Don't know the schedule just updated recently and might be stopped again. Story Development - 3 stars, Slow Story Development, Might be slow because of the kingdom building and skills he get. Character design - 1 star (for me because of MC), Yes we don't even know the future chapters, He might grow or different but the first impression is SH*T. A modern person adapted TOO FAST, After he's born he's arrogant AF and wants to be a king? oh please... he's strong but not Wise,Intelligent, and CRAZY. (It's a FACT about mc.) Getting skills of wood crafting and armor crafting is a bad decision, He doesn't even have many RESOURCES, You need DEVELOPMENT skills even though he's gonna be a king EVENTUALLY you need yourself first not subordinates. (and many more but I don't want to add anymore I want to read not review this thing forever.) World Background - 2 stars, Not enough world building.
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LIKENamelessGodking:Thank you for the review I appreciate you reading but I’m curious how far did you read?
Oh alright I’ll make sure to improve, but again thank you for reading and having time to leave a review. I greatly appreciate your help.
Torafor:Chapter 17, Checked the early chapters to see the writing quality overall.