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Review Detail of Torafor in New World: The rise of Meruem

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Torafor
ToraforLv43yrTorafor

Writing Quality - 3 stars, Good writing in some chapters but Decent writing for the whole book. Stability of Updates - 1 star, Don't know the schedule just updated recently and might be stopped again. Story Development - 3 stars, Slow Story Development, Might be slow because of the kingdom building and skills he get. Character design - 1 star (for me because of MC), Yes we don't even know the future chapters, He might grow or different but the first impression is SH*T. A modern person adapted TOO FAST, After he's born he's arrogant AF and wants to be a king? oh please... he's strong but not Wise,Intelligent, and CRAZY. (It's a FACT about mc.) Getting skills of wood crafting and armor crafting is a bad decision, He doesn't even have many RESOURCES, You need DEVELOPMENT skills even though he's gonna be a king EVENTUALLY you need yourself first not subordinates. (and many more but I don't want to add anymore I want to read not review this thing forever.) World Background - 2 stars, Not enough world building.

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New World: The rise of Meruem

NamelessGodking

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NamelessGodking
NamelessGodkingAuthorNamelessGodking

Thank you for the review I appreciate you reading but I’m curious how far did you read?

Torafor
ToraforLv4Torafor

Chapter 17, Checked the early chapters to see the writing quality overall.

NamelessGodking:Thank you for the review I appreciate you reading but I’m curious how far did you read?
NamelessGodking
NamelessGodkingAuthorNamelessGodking

Oh alright I’ll make sure to improve, but again thank you for reading and having time to leave a review. I greatly appreciate your help.

Torafor:Chapter 17, Checked the early chapters to see the writing quality overall.