I have read 4 chapters. The story is still in the nascent stage. I understand 17 Chapters have been published. The stability of updates is good. The story is developing well. The character design is good and the World background is well defined and different. As far as the writing quality goes, it is clear. I noticed a few typos and grammar issues. These do not interfere with the flow of the story. However, they can be edited or you can use an online grammar checker before publishing your chapters. I use too but when I don't then the typos and spelling mistakes do creep in. All the best, Author!
NamelessGodking
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