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Review Detail of Crazy_Penguin in Infinite Adventure

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Crazy_Penguin
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First time writing a review...All i can say this book makes you facepalm literally every time.. - MC literally trust everyone....He gives free stuff to everyone he meets...He tells he has his own world, basically tell he has his own world, takes them his world. - At least keep it mysterious so that he tells people who he calls lover or companions. - Everyone people who he makes friends with are basically becomes sworn "brothers". - I get it that you are trying to change the plot that way you like (i completely support) but at least keep it One Piece stuff. Common man (High tech guns/youth pill....)this completely ruins the immersion. This story has lot of potential but personally i think its going on a wrong path, but i get it author trying to write the way he likes it but it would be beneficial if you write a chapter in between to ask question basked on plot progression. _ MC doesn't use his brain.. Cringe.... - I like he is OP , but actually he uses his brain sometimes, i get this novel is supposed be causal and fun but i think it would be fun if he just doesn't give free stuff like weapons which are supposed to be high-tech(not from One Piece).

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