Everything is really well done it’s an op female protag which is extremely rare but at the same time she’s completely invincible. And the story just doesn’t drop off, your also really decent at fight scenes. But I also feel you are similar to me when it comes to writing them. (It’s really difficult to write fight scenes when your character is so broken they can end it in a second, so I’m personally a little lazy and don’t write them often.)
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