Review Detail of EphemeralKaos in Dragon ancestor
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I’ve read up to chapter 12 and all I have to say is that this is ****ty as hell like You may think I’m being mean or rude calling someone’s work ****ty but I honestly don’t know what else to call it this is garbage. The main character  was a waste to society before he was reincarnated now that he has been he’s even more of a waste I mean he is a useless stupid idiotic hypocritical piece of garbage. Now do you Arthur you don’t know how to properly word sentences your grammar sucks I mean I’ve seen worse but it’s still bad and your character creation is garbage and the worst part is I actually like this story’s concept but you and all your crap ruined it.
Dragon ancestor
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OK this was a bit overboard I admit that I was angry at the time of writing this but I still stick with most of what I’ve said you need to redo this. The chapters are too short and the main character constantly makes contradictory decisions like at one moment he says I’m done holding back or hiding what I can do and then at the next he hides even more than what he did before. And These are just some of the problems I have with this.