Review Detail of AzureMatt in Dragon ancestor

There is no kind way to say this, the story is terrible. The spelling, grammar and punctuation are all disgusting; the MC is a ungrateful brat who calls the Cliche god stingy because he is only given one wish (he totally could have been given nothing). There is no character development as the MC is essentially handed power on a silver platter, he can perform jutsu on first try at a higher level than adults can reach. The writing quality of this story does not progress at all, read at your own risk. To the author, I’m not saying you should give up, but at least get a person more proficient in English to proof read your work and fix any grammatical errors. That should solve a large portion of your problems.