Review Detail of DKILLER1 in Journey of the Great Red

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DKILLER1Lv44yrDKILLER1

Too many plot holes are there & it feels like I'm reading a hentai novel. Not much character development as well as story development. Story does not seems to follow the canon & tags should be apply here is Harem, NTR, Brainwash, 18+..

Journey of the Great Red

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Md_Omr_AlphaAuthorMd_Omr_Alpha

Appreciate your feedback. I'll work on my mistakes and try to fix the problems that you have pointed out. Thank you.

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