Review Detail of ara_rara_3628 in NightOwl
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Please rewrite your story, it's already a trash from the beginning. You really didn't have any rights to even mock others works. Your writing even has more laughable miss grammar than the works you've mock. Let me tell you why your work don't even have any comments or supporters until now and until the future! 1. Shallow Ideas 2. Lame MMORPG story 3. Not a creative story building 4. YOUR CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT! DON'T EVEN TRY TO MAKE A NOVEL IF YOU DON'T HAVE ANY WILL TO MAKE IT!!! 5. You've broken a lot of new authors! Stop spreading hate!!! Even a mistake could be forgiven and have the right to not be mocked! YOU'RE NOT ACCEPTED IN THIS PLATFORM!!! JUST GO AWAY AND F*%# OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aww.. did I say bad words on a novel you wrote ? And this the only way you can feel better? To throw a fit? What did I say? That harems sucked? Or maybe I told you to edit your chapters so they don't look like a cat walked across a keyboard? Is your ego so small that you can't take simple criticism? Guess what alot of authors are like you they expect nonstop praise and a cookie ... I am not one of them idc what you say idc if I get rated 0 stars cause I write for myself not for so done to give me a pat on the back like a good little kid