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Fonzy_5893
Fonzy_5893Lv15yr
2020-02-02 16:25

Structure is poor. Characterization is poor. World building is poor. I wish that the writer polishes his/her sentence construction. Sentences should have complete thought.

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Thank you for your feedback and pointing out the things I need to change or fix for this story. I'll make sure to edit and polish it once I manage to sign in back to the account. I don't remember the email I've used for this account.

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