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The story itself isn't ALL bad. It pains me to leave such a bad review when the other stories are entertaining... This character is literally a Mary Sue, for those who don't know, that's an overpowered character that has everything and barely any, IF ANY, weaknesses. Right off the bat, she tells everyone she knows literally everything from the beginning of time to the end of the plot. They accept it and don't even ask any questions to know more about what's to come and whatever else. She literally just dissed hard the leader of one of the strongest clans, he'd never allow that, even if she's "protected" by the Hokage. Banking his reaction on a chance that most likely only happened near the end of Shippuden for plot reason, Hiashi isn't a nice person who'd chuckle at being shat on by a kid. I like the other stories a lot, understand that this one however isn't all that great.
The Unknown Goddess: A Naruto FanFic
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Ah, well. I don't actually have anything to say. This story was me trying something different so yeah .I know what I did and I won't try to prove a point or anything ,because I enjoy my own story and will continue to write it. Athena was meant to be a Mary sue. I realize that the characters are not what they originally were .And I know certain logical reactions and scenes did not take place. Buuuuuuuut. Heh. Weeeeell. Yeah. haha. I appreciate the review even if it hurt a lot. I'm a very sensitive person. Weak willed as well, I'm certain . It hurts but it won't last long because this is a story I'm rather proud of despite the flaws you noted. I always tend to bring back certain actions or situations that had happened in the past to the future, where the consequences will finally show itself. I don't know if you finished this or not or of you will continue and I won't let myself worry about it ,for I will continue to write about my Mary sue. So yeah. Those are my thoughts. Have a good one
Actually, Mary Sue and Overpowered character is different. Overpowered character is, well, overpowered. As for Mary Sue character, they're not actually overpowered, rather they are characters that have the ability to solve anything through inexplicable means even bordering illogical or impossible. Somehow at somepoint people start equalizing both and for those that know the difference it's confusing.