To be honest the beginning was really cringy since she shared her knowledge that she knows everything from..manga and anime (uuuuuugh), but it was needed since she literally spawned outside the gate without any connections. Aside from the cringe I also did not like how she got allot of OP stuff in the beginning, but then we would also have to go through allot of training chapters to power her up so ?maybe? it was best to skip all of that stuff since allot of power ups in the narutoverse depend on the tailed beasts and kekkei genkai. I did enjoy reading the story, the characters are well defined (I really love how you portrayed interactions between her family, it is just so wholesome.) and the story is ok.
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