I love your writing it is very well done. Unlike many fanfics I've read with string OC yours actually can beat Zabuza. I enjoy that while you use the canon as a guide you make changes and make it your own. I was tired of all the fanfics that develop their OC as super strong S ranked ninja or whatnot but they never actually effect the plot line so they loose to Zabuza etc. I'm looking forward to how you handle snake pedo.
Archer_Phoenix
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