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666Daoist
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The writing style is what I'm attracted to a novel/fanfic and really thought I've found another hidden gem but her telling him everything ruined it for me. You see, I'm not a fan of MC sharing their knowledge about their life in another world, much less telling her about the Naruto world being an anime or manga, so what would happen now? tell him how he died and how Tobi/Madara was none but Obito? and how Sasuke betrayed the village and how Jiraiya died and how Naruto became the hero? I'm sorry I've to dropped, didn't finish reading chapter 1, gave up when she revealed everything also I thought she was having memory problem

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The Unknown Goddess: A Naruto FanFic

Archer_Phoenix

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Archer_Phoenix
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Dude she has short term memory loss. She couldn't remember what happened just before she woke up. I really can't feel a way about you just dropping my hook because she told him of her knowledge, but seriously though I do feel a way. I know what you mean when you say you don't like am MC like that. In all honesty I don't either,well at least I don't like when they reveal every single detail. My MC does not do that. Yes she tells the man that she knows of the world because of this and that, does she go into detail about everything that took place? No, that would just be stupid. She doesn't talk much about what she knows she just found it would be better is the old man knows, that way he would leave her be when she does some things that others might question. Sooooo yeah. Maybe I should have left you alone. I mean it's your choice and all, but I really wanted to say something because I don't like when people just give up on a book on chapter one. You didn't even read on to chapter two to see how things worked out. She didn't even tell him anything about her past. She didn't tell him about anyone's death. She never told Kakashi about Obito being alive nor did she tell the old man that Obito was the one who controlled the fox. She said nothing about Jiraiya dying, she didn't even hint towards it. So again, sorry for doing this I just couldn't help it OK. I'm an author and I sometimes get offended by certain things. Even then I try to be super chill about everything, but I really can't accept the fact that you dropped the book because she decided to do what she thought was logical while also not revealing a lot. All she said was that she knew of the world because of manga and such. 😥 that's that Archer out

666Daoist
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Sorry that if I sound I’m mean :( I didn't meant to. When I wrote this I was very passionate and I'm regretting what I say now, need to remember that I’m speaking to another person. Well you said she didn't reveal everything but I don't think that's possible either knowing Hiruzen. I mean that guy is just another piece of **** playing a good guy. Manipulating people with the so called "Will of Fire" so I don't believe he'll easily let go someone who knows everything about Past,Present and future because if he was capable of giving out an order to wipe out the entire Uchiha clan just because they pose a threat to the village then the MC faith is sealed the moment she utter the word about her knowledge because she's an even greater threat than the Uchihas

Archer_Phoenix:Dude she has short term memory loss. She couldn't remember what happened just before she woke up. I really can't feel a way about you just dropping my hook because she told him of her knowledge, but seriously though I do feel a way. I know what you mean when you say you don't like am MC like that. In all honesty I don't either,well at least I don't like when they reveal every single detail. My MC does not do that. Yes she tells the man that she knows of the world because of this and that, does she go into detail about everything that took place? No, that would just be stupid. She doesn't talk much about what she knows she just found it would be better is the old man knows, that way he would leave her be when she does some things that others might question. Sooooo yeah. Maybe I should have left you alone. I mean it's your choice and all, but I really wanted to say something because I don't like when people just give up on a book on chapter one. You didn't even read on to chapter two to see how things worked out. She didn't even tell him anything about her past. She didn't tell him about anyone's death. She never told Kakashi about Obito being alive nor did she tell the old man that Obito was the one who controlled the fox. She said nothing about Jiraiya dying, she didn't even hint towards it. So again, sorry for doing this I just couldn't help it OK. I'm an author and I sometimes get offended by certain things. Even then I try to be super chill about everything, but I really can't accept the fact that you dropped the book because she decided to do what she thought was logical while also not revealing a lot. All she said was that she knew of the world because of manga and such. 😥 that's that Archer out
Archer_Phoenix
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On the contrary, I think I made my Oc think things through. I did a lot of research on Hiruzen and I found that he wasn't all bad. He ordered to have the Uchiha's wiped out because there were no longer any other options at the time. Everyone wanted him to do it and the old man is a pushover. Just try to read it a bit and see what I'm trying to say. Athena has some idea of what she's doing and later on when she's older she's a bit more sneaky and such. I really don't know what else to say, so yeah. I get what you're saying. I thought the same thing about the old man until I did the research. Peace out

666Daoist:Sorry that if I sound I’m mean :( I didn't meant to. When I wrote this I was very passionate and I'm regretting what I say now, need to remember that I’m speaking to another person. Well you said she didn't reveal everything but I don't think that's possible either knowing Hiruzen. I mean that guy is just another piece of **** playing a good guy. Manipulating people with the so called "Will of Fire" so I don't believe he'll easily let go someone who knows everything about Past,Present and future because if he was capable of giving out an order to wipe out the entire Uchiha clan just because they pose a threat to the village then the MC faith is sealed the moment she utter the word about her knowledge because she's an even greater threat than the Uchihas
Reddit_Alt
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To be honest telling the old man was the best way out of the current situation all she knew was that she was a normal person at first.

Archer_Phoenix:Dude she has short term memory loss. She couldn't remember what happened just before she woke up. I really can't feel a way about you just dropping my hook because she told him of her knowledge, but seriously though I do feel a way. I know what you mean when you say you don't like am MC like that. In all honesty I don't either,well at least I don't like when they reveal every single detail. My MC does not do that. Yes she tells the man that she knows of the world because of this and that, does she go into detail about everything that took place? No, that would just be stupid. She doesn't talk much about what she knows she just found it would be better is the old man knows, that way he would leave her be when she does some things that others might question. Sooooo yeah. Maybe I should have left you alone. I mean it's your choice and all, but I really wanted to say something because I don't like when people just give up on a book on chapter one. You didn't even read on to chapter two to see how things worked out. She didn't even tell him anything about her past. She didn't tell him about anyone's death. She never told Kakashi about Obito being alive nor did she tell the old man that Obito was the one who controlled the fox. She said nothing about Jiraiya dying, she didn't even hint towards it. So again, sorry for doing this I just couldn't help it OK. I'm an author and I sometimes get offended by certain things. Even then I try to be super chill about everything, but I really can't accept the fact that you dropped the book because she decided to do what she thought was logical while also not revealing a lot. All she said was that she knew of the world because of manga and such. 😥 that's that Archer out
Trap_Mocha
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I'm not even sure if Hiruzen ordered the Uchiha clan to be wiped out. I don't recall that at all. However, I do recall Danzo speaking about it to Itachi and Itachi agreeing to do it.

daydreamer_no1
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the author is right I believe the old fart had regrets over the incident, especially having itachi do all that and then some. plus if mc didn't tell him, he would of been suspicious of her because be real her the naruto world is messed up behind the colorful moments we see and he has the responsibility of watching over the whole village so if a girl came in that looked like his students "dead" kid and she didn't explain anything especially with her disappearing all the time now that would make him think she was suspicious, and we have to remetmber he went through the shinobi wars who knew what shiz he went through. and he deserves a break really guy is supposed to be retired. if you're really gonna judge a character at least know the character Abit more.

666Daoist:Sorry that if I sound I’m mean :( I didn't meant to. When I wrote this I was very passionate and I'm regretting what I say now, need to remember that I’m speaking to another person. Well you said she didn't reveal everything but I don't think that's possible either knowing Hiruzen. I mean that guy is just another piece of **** playing a good guy. Manipulating people with the so called "Will of Fire" so I don't believe he'll easily let go someone who knows everything about Past,Present and future because if he was capable of giving out an order to wipe out the entire Uchiha clan just because they pose a threat to the village then the MC faith is sealed the moment she utter the word about her knowledge because she's an even greater threat than the Uchihas
Kitsunc
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She could have said, her grandmother was a shaman that died and gave a Precognition about them. Her grandmother sent her over has a mission to come to that future.

Archer_Phoenix:Dude she has short term memory loss. She couldn't remember what happened just before she woke up. I really can't feel a way about you just dropping my hook because she told him of her knowledge, but seriously though I do feel a way. I know what you mean when you say you don't like am MC like that. In all honesty I don't either,well at least I don't like when they reveal every single detail. My MC does not do that. Yes she tells the man that she knows of the world because of this and that, does she go into detail about everything that took place? No, that would just be stupid. She doesn't talk much about what she knows she just found it would be better is the old man knows, that way he would leave her be when she does some things that others might question. Sooooo yeah. Maybe I should have left you alone. I mean it's your choice and all, but I really wanted to say something because I don't like when people just give up on a book on chapter one. You didn't even read on to chapter two to see how things worked out. She didn't even tell him anything about her past. She didn't tell him about anyone's death. She never told Kakashi about Obito being alive nor did she tell the old man that Obito was the one who controlled the fox. She said nothing about Jiraiya dying, she didn't even hint towards it. So again, sorry for doing this I just couldn't help it OK. I'm an author and I sometimes get offended by certain things. Even then I try to be super chill about everything, but I really can't accept the fact that you dropped the book because she decided to do what she thought was logical while also not revealing a lot. All she said was that she knew of the world because of manga and such. 😥 that's that Archer out
Trap_Mocha
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Manga & Anime version differs, I get it now

Trap_Mocha:I'm not even sure if Hiruzen ordered the Uchiha clan to be wiped out. I don't recall that at all. However, I do recall Danzo speaking about it to Itachi and Itachi agreeing to do it.
BLUE_olive
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i agree with you.