Review Detail of Lord_lucky in The Unknown Goddess: A Naruto FanFic

Ok.

I mean you could have just pushed through and enjoy the story. She doesn't remain depressed forever. From chapter twenty she's doing great and she grows tremendously in power. But then again, some people just can't handle certain stuff, so it's cool. It's not like I struggled writting I relate to so much. And of you had a problem with it, you could have just said so I would have been fine but the fact that you said you hated the story while you most likely haven't read to the latest chapter isn't very cool. You ever think that it would be a bit offensive? Imagine someone telling you they hated a story that was based off of something you went through. It wouldn't be very pleasant.

I mean you could have just pushed through and enjoy the story. She doesn't remain depressed forever. From chapter twenty she's doing great and she grows tremendously in power. But then again, some people just can't handle certain stuff, so it's cool. It's not like I struggled writting I relate to so much. And of you had a problem with it, you could have just said so I would have been fine but the fact that you said you hated the story while you most likely haven't read to the latest chapter isn't very cool. You ever think that it would be a bit offensive? Imagine someone telling you they hated a story that was based off of something you went through. It wouldn't be very pleasant.

What also bothers me is the fact that you admit to liking my DBZ fic and failed to review it, but you go and find my Naruto fic, hate it and decide to be very rude and insensitive about it. I can't write about things I never experienced in my life. How are you going to hate a story that sheds light on what some people in the world actually go through? It's not easy getting over such a thing

Agreed tell 'em

i don't care if the story is about something you went through, i still don't like it, and even if some stories are about whatever authors went through or lived doesn't mean they're good or you'll like them, i don't give a shi* if you don't like my review or delete it but a review is to show how you felt about the story and i did just that.

Fine have it your way. I just think that you can't decide not to like a book because the character starts off a bit depressed. Maybe you don't like that part but who knows, you might like how the book ends up when she gets better. It's not like she could be depressed forever. And I won't be deleting your review. I don't like it, that I will admit, but I don't see the need to take it down. It's the first time someone has given any of my books a review about them disliking my book. There's a first for everything. You're not the first to not like the book. Other people have told me that it wasn't for them but none were being insensitive about it. Reading the book made you want to choke me? Dude? Seriously? But hey. You like what you like. You hate what you hate. You're a human being and I am as well. So you're review pissed me off and I gave you a piece of my mind. My reply pissed you off and you gave me a piece of your mind. So that's the end of that. Please refrain from cursing

+2

You can't have a story with characters that are happy all the time, the story won't be able to progress much without any adversity and it would grow stale. Don't you see that her being vulnerable and having been broken in the past allows for a seed that can sprout a well defined character? But if you want to have a go-and-be-happy-story you can go and watch My little pony lmao.

Yeesh...