Review Detail of Higgs in Endless adventure: A Fairy Tail Fanfic

For my good feedback, the story was great and entertaining. Cool take on the powers and phoenix and all. Nice going with the conversations and the back stories. It was a nice take on a chill story. The bad side of it is, this isn't much of an adventure anymore. This would be considered more like a slice of life genre rather than and adventure. The story constitutes more of the characters lives than the adventure itself or the cannon. The use of having goddeses and dragons in keys made no sense with the story so far. It took 53 chapters just to reach the start of the assumed cannon which should have started long ago. Its a good story but having a slice of life story like this with no thrill or setbacks give no spice to the story.