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I've only read upto chapter 4 so excuse me for any ignorance about the character and story progression of future chapters. MC starts out very strong(powerwise) and already has interest in love interest so it just feels like the story progresses way too fast. Plus the MC doesn't have much of a personality (it is only chapter 4 for me). I liked the author's DBZ fanfic more to be honest but this fanfic sadly doesn't have the same quality as that one. I'll edit and correct my review later when I have finished reading the rest of the story.

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Endless adventure: A Fairy Tail Fanfic

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Yo. Thanks for the honest review. Even though it kinda hurts. That's just the way it is. I get it what you're saying. When I reread it I almost laughed at myself. The first few chapters were written long before I wrote my other stories hence the difference I guess. However I had this idea in my head for a long while and decided to go with it. I know my main character is a bit bland, but there is reason for that. I hope you actually stick around to find out why her personality is a bit odd or lacks as you say. Again I appreciate the review. Archer out

Archer_Phoenix
Archer_PhoenixAuthorArcher_Phoenix

Yo. Thanks for the honest review. Even though it kinda hurts. That's just the way it is. I get it what you're saying. When I reread it I almost laughed at myself. The first few chapters were written long before I wrote my other stories hence the difference I guess. However I had this idea in my head for a long while and decided to go with it. I know my main character is a bit bland, but there is reason for that. I hope you actually stick around to find out why her personality is a bit odd or lacks as you say. Again I appreciate the review. Archer out