Review Detail of Overwrit in Destroy Worlds of Fiction with Science

The only flaw in my opinion, is the development of the story and the character, everything else I consider quite good. The development is good, it's a little cliché what is annoying to me, but nothing so important, but as the development of the story is oriented to the MC makes it worse the qualification that it would have, more than anything because the MC to be so smart, seems to me quite silly in many occasions (I read until chapter 44). The author makes his dick move so that he can't get OFA for the plot obviously, and he makes the excuse that the power of the main character links him to that world, that is, pure shit. But the most annoying thing I found was how silly he is to play with his soul and link it to animals without thinking about the obvious, they are animals, besides the fact that they are not really useful, he is playing with your soul, even in the chapter of the robbery the system tells him that he should not do that because he could die, and he ended up tying his soul to some random dog, a crazy squirrel, and a grumpy snake, while giving them their power to Adapt and Improve, which bothers me but that's already personal to me and not a bad thing in the plot, I think. I just find MC so careless, silly, childish and unimaginative, since the author made him look like someone who is quite smart and seems to think things through, but then does something silly like playing with his soul.