Review Detail of Daoist_Storm in Ascension of the elder
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I just don't get how the MC looses his memory but can remember information and even details of the info that correlate directly to his life from earth for example the martial arts he knows, the ones he used to practice and the ones he just knows but did not practice. the more i read the more unrealistic the MC is becoming. my advice to the author please read ''Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon'' and its sequel Journey of an ''Overpowered Transmigrated Wizard'' it might give an idea the of the type of MC suitable to this type of story and also please make the other characters a bit more realistic they are too trusting,dumb and naive in my opinion.THIS is the most important advice i can give do not let the MC forget his past if u decide to rewrite this story its obvious you are using the amnesia of the MC to give weight to how difficult his reincarnation was but its absolutely unnecessary.
Ascension of the elder
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I look at it similar to amnesia. Similar but not the same. Amnesiacs can forget (certain) people, particular incidents, everything or close to it. I think the author should have explained it. I chuck it up to his "transmigration battles". As they were trying to make him disappear bit of him did before he was yeeted. . As an average Joe though he knew too much in my opinion too.
''As an average Joe though he knew too much in my opinion too'' this is the problem i'm talking about lets use the movie ''Bourne Identity'' now most of the stuff the mc could remember was due to muscle memory but the mc of this book seems like he can remember everything he saw and learnt but some how forgot his identity. i don't know if i am explaining myself well but all i'm trying to say is the MC's amnesia is extremely weird,unbelievable and unnecessary.
Little_Ancestor:I look at it similar to amnesia. Similar but not the same. Amnesiacs can forget (certain) people, particular incidents, everything or close to it. I think the author should have explained it. I chuck it up to his "transmigration battles". As they were trying to make him disappear bit of him did before he was yeeted. . As an average Joe though he knew too much in my opinion too.
Right it is very weird. I'd rather he remembered more of him "old man" memories instead of acting kind of mature.
Daoist_Storm:''As an average Joe though he knew too much in my opinion too'' this is the problem i'm talking about lets use the movie ''Bourne Identity'' now most of the stuff the mc could remember was due to muscle memory but the mc of this book seems like he can remember everything he saw and learnt but some how forgot his identity. i don't know if i am explaining myself well but all i'm trying to say is the MC's amnesia is extremely weird,unbelievable and unnecessary.