Review Detail of nicck1223 in Ascension of the elder

Truth me told I didn’t even give the book a try. The title of the book is not in proper grammar. The title should be “Ascension of the Elder”. Also, while giving a summary or intro to the book, you never start a sentence with the word “but”. There was also a few missing commas, but at this point I’m just really going at it with the nit-picking for proper grammar.