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Review Detail of SilentPain in Godly Otaku Divine System

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Seems pretty interesting but there is just way too much backstory spread throughout the first volume. Could have formatted it differently by putting the entire flashback in one place and then continuing the plot after. Other than that, a great novel.

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thanks for the review. I've looked into correcting the flashbacks but didn't find a perfect method just yet...