Review Detail of VestBeneathShirt in Godly Otaku Divine System
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The shameless author here blah blah blah~ XD Let's get right into what you can expect from this novel. GODSystem is a LitRPG/Serious/Comedy novel with more than light hints of Cultivation. The next thing is that at least half of all the story arcs, characters, magic, and skills are inspired by real-world history and mythology. Hence the 'GODS' acronym. Then I also TRY to put in references to other novels, and other popular media. See if you can spot'em. XD A VERY basic idea of what is to be expected from this novel can be obtained from the 'non-memory' parts of Volume 1. All memories will end after Volume 1. Feel free to ask anything else.
Godly Otaku Divine System
VestBeneathShirt
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Hey, thanks for the reply. Can't say much about the 'writing style' cuz since it is a 'style' some will like it and some will not. But the next part is a problem: 'Can't discern what is what and who is saying what?' I assume you're talking about conversations? I always mention the person who is speaking, before they do. Except in a few rare instances where it should be obvious. 'Don't use marks to discern which is which...?' Do you mean quotation marks? But I do? So I'm not sure what to say... BUT if you still disagree feel free to point out some places and I'll check it out. XD
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:Point seems good but your writing style is horrible..... Can decern what is what....and who saying what.... You don't use marks to decern which is which..... And the mc and the portray you do with is also not so likeable.....
I hope it is a harem..... All those skills that he could use to seduce girls + shameless behaviour + shaming the heavens would be useless if no harem
VestBeneathShirt:Can't confirm for sure cause it might change, but for now, most probably yes.
hey there, I just might. There's a a pretty good chance of restarting this, while working on my other books. Do take a look if you're interested.
Blazing_1NS4N1TY:please good kind great sir, comtinue this masterpiece!!!!! i have checked on this book every few days for the past few months wanting, no, craving more g.o.d.s