Review Detail of Draconianod in Godly Otaku Divine System

Draconianod thanx for the comment. But I don't get what you're saying. Where exactly was the grammar incorrect? I thought i fixed most of it. And do you mean to say that the battle time is too short?

3 chapters for a battle to end, well no problems in other novels take up to 10 chapters, but I think that with 2 chapters that battle was enough, by the way at times I felt that I was reading a story or a narration and not a novel that I felt In Chapter 3, the rest I can say is a great novel you created.

just started, it can improve in the future.

don't discourage him xd

Thanx I'll keep it in mind

Do not forget that he spent 3 chapters to think and the wicked did not attack him, is it that he will have kk in his head that does not take advantage of his moment of delirium?

it lacks image, it would be more striking, to the novel

I'll start working on that after 20 chapters. Any ideas where I can get one from?

Well, I added a cover sooner.