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Think you should not show mc as some one so rash as to read babys mind.Also please dont make him empire building character with usual ideas like befriending elf,starting company based on muggle ideas...try something new or just make him fighter type you know...make harry recoginze his inheritance..create a similar grey voldemort character it will be good...overall best of luck author.. Hope you write good novel