Review Detail of kalins368 in His little fortune

The story was fun and Engaging in the beginning then the FL‘s character and story development Became inconsistent and boring. there were too many fillers and story was kinda all over the place with random ppl dropping in and forgotten. THe ML seemed powerful but not really- he was ok. I felt very Empathetic about the 2nd & 3rd ML lead. Overall, the story had potential but it had some pacing issues with fillers and not interesting and boring And repetitive dialogues but I still completed the book waiting for that bIg plot reveal but it never really happened. The author brushes it off by telling the Reader that it was “fixed” but doesn’t go into details how. They throw in a reveal about the 2nd Ml and Fl that I don’t quite understand and makes the story more stranGe.