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2020-03-10 11:24

Plot is good. Character development needs more focus.Twists and turns are good. Sometimes find it confusing. Needs more clarity. The protagonist view needs to be changed

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I DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT TO ALL READERS! THIS IS AWESOMEE AND A GOOD BOOK STORY! THE FEMLE LEAD IS COOL AND SMART HAS ALSO A CHEAT.. WHICH IS THE SPACE! AND I LOVE THE FACT THAT THE MALE LEAD ALSO KNOW ABOUT HER SECRET AND ABOUT TO COME INSIDE THE SPACE ALSO. I love how the wife and husband are together always.. together in the missions.. I also love the fact that Sheng Fenghua the female lead is so kind but dangerous also. she can be cold and ruthless if needed... has a genius knowledge about medicine.. and building her own hospital and pharmacy... She help so many people! Creating connections! And the Male Lead! Si Zhanbei is a very SUPPORTIVE HUSBAND EVER! THEY ARE SO CUTE TOGETHER! I love also the fact that it has so many chapters and free because it is a machine translation only but it doesnt hide the fact that even though sometimes the grammar is poor! The sense and understanding the chapter can make u know the whole chapter story... if u know what i mean.. They have kids which is cuteee.. And the ending is okay.. but I want moree.. like what happend after that.. i want the familyโ€™s reaction and etc.. or some special chapters like a family with the kidss.. and how they grow...l it ended like that.. The end is okay but i may not say its satisfying but I felt that i want more to read about them.. after all tye problems and challenges they took.. i want some peaceful chapter with full of happiness.. but sadly, thereโ€™s nothing.. but the ending is okay HAHHAH BUTBSTIL I REALLY RECOMMEND IT EVERYONE! IT IS GOOD! INTERESTING AND MAY SOMEHOW UNIQUE IN SOME WAY!!!!

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