webnovel
Guitar_Girl
Guitar_GirlLv44yr
2020-09-02 15:02

HONEST REVIEW:- The story is amazing. Characters are also amazing. However I find a little difficulty in reading because of grammar problems, incomplete information and updating problem. When I saw this synopsis of this story I started to read it without noticing anything else. But when I reached at last chapter, I found that since a long time ago the updating of this story is stopped. It might be because of some problem but I think author should at leave a message about not updating or if the author had re-write this story with another name. Overall, I like the development of the story till now. But I wanted to know more. So please, if the author is reading my review, I request to update about this story, please! 😊😊😊

The business girl who was reborn on campus was 18 years old

After the incident
4.6
97 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
elsin
elsinLv5

Different than other rebirth novels. Both fl and villainess have reincarnated. Supernatural story. Nice story overall.. Translation is sometimes messed up but can be ignored.

5yr

LittleLuo
LittleLuoLv13

Amazing! Simple words can't explain how excited I feel about this novel, mysterious and funny, everything here make me more and more curious. Translate very well. The only thing to say's: Please,More chapters! I really enjoy this adventure and need some more of this. 😂😂😂

5yr
Aishath_Suha
Aishath_SuhaLv4

👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️👻👹💀👺☠️

5yr
navlakha
navlakhaLv5

Something different then all rebirth story.. . I love the mystery factor....ghost and suspense...lot of fun to read this. Some grammatical mistakes are there but we can tak it with the flow of story......can be improved

5yr
jed1337
jed1337Lv15

I really like this novel. It is pretty unique. The character development and world building are mostly fleshed out, at least for a webnovel. I hope they have consistent updates otherwise it'll be a waste of having it MTL.

5yr
aawad123456
aawad123456Lv11

does anyone know title in raw......................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
DaoistTm12ED
DaoistTm12EDLv4

The grammar and wording is rather poor. Not only do the characters change gender every two paragraphs, but the names are also not consistent. Furthermore does the world background change and alternate (it is said that people are not superstitions, but the first thing everyone things about are ghost).

3yr
Annejohn
AnnejohnLv10

The one I choose to read are that the mc are strong and clever like this character in this story,never back on your steps went it come revenge to the people that harm you,

5yr
Dionyv
DionyvLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Related Stories

Surprise Marriage to a Billionaire

The contract says she can’t share his bed, but nothing stops him from getting into hers… * Rain Clayton’s life takes an unexpected turn when she discovers she’s suddenly married to a billionaire named Alexander Lancaster, a powerful and dangerously captivating man who wants their marriage over before it even begins... Raised by a family that never cared for her and desperate to avoid a twisted arranged marriage, Rain seizes this unexpected twist of fate. Her new husband might be a cold-hearted billionaire, but he's her only escape. Yet Alexander demands a swift divorce. Refusing to lose her one chance at freedom, Rain strikes a risky bargain to keep their marriage alive, even if it means playing by Alexander’s rules. She just has to convince him to want her around… FOREVER. Weeks into their unexpected arrangement, Rain begins to see through Alexander’s icy exterior. But one night, she’s taken by surprise. “What are you doing?” Rain burst out, eyes wide as Alexander casually slid into her bed. “Performing husbandly duties,” he smirked. “You can’t stay here! It’s against the contract!” “I’m not breaking it,” Alexander said with a shrug. “The contract specifies that you’ll fulfill all wifely duties, excluding sharing my bed. It doesn’t say anything about me not performing husbandly duties, including sharing your bed.” The situation had shifted, and it seemed like she was no longer the only one in control... [Warning: r18+/strong mature & sexual content]

Eustoma_Reyna · Urban
4.8
432 Chs

Married the Tough Guy After Transmigrating

When Xu Ying woke up in the post-apocalyptic world, she found herself back at eighteen years old in her previous life! Luckily, her portable space was filled with spoils from raiding supermarkets, including clothing, food, shelter, and various weapons and medicines. This made Xu Ying ecstatic. In an era of scarce resources and poverty, she had enough to ensure her family lived a good life. While other families favored sons over daughters, Xu's family had always cherished Xu Ying as their precious jewel. Having squandered a good hand in her previous life, she was determined to do better this time by kicking scumbags to the curb and tearing down the 'green tea' women, all while protecting her family and incidentally snagging the toughest man in the village! Huo Chen had a solitary nature and fearsome appearance, causing children to cry at the sight of him, but Xu Ying, who had honed her skills during the apocalypse, was not afraid of the notoriously fierce man at all. Xu Ying: What do you want to do? We're just partners. Huo Chen: You think you can seduce me and then run? No way.

Nan Nan went home. · Urban
5.0
405 Chs

Rebirth: I Became Mr.President's Beloved

“I, Tang Li, will only marry the most powerful and influential man in the world!” The powerful man, Song Boyan, was the man she was clinging onto now. The man was holding a cigarette between his fingers. He touched her chin softly. “Do you know what you are talking about?” “I want to be Mrs. Song.” Mr. Song laughed aloud. “You do like to brag. Aren’t you afraid of its consequences?” He received a kiss just as he was done talking. Her previous life was awful because she had loved the wrong man. After her rebirth, she had made a vow that she wanted to set things straight for herself. However, she had clung onto a powerful man in the end. Their marriage was rather chaotic too. “Sir, Madam has ruined the eastern wall of the manor.” “Protect her well. Don’t let her hurt herself.” “Sir, Madam said that she wants to run away from home with the young master.” Mr. Song sighed and put down the documents in his hands. “Send them to wherever they want to go. Don’t let them get lost on the way,” Mr. Song ordered.

Miss Little Crayon · Urban
4.4
181 Chs

Rebirth: A Second chance at life

Luna Lethal, a name synonymous with fear and power, ruled both the underworld and the elite circles of society. Orphaned young, she rose through treachery to become a master of manipulation and skill. Yet, her reign ended in betrayal—a laboratory explosion claimed her life. To the world, her death was a tragedy; to her enemies, a cause for celebration. But Luna awakens in the body of Aurora Smith, a neglected and ridiculed child despised by her adoptive family. Stripped of her former strength but not her will, Luna faces a choice: seek revenge for Aurora’s mistreatment or forge a new path. As her sharp mind and unyielding spirit transform Aurora’s life, shadows of Luna’s past resurface. Loyal followers sense her presence, while old enemies seek to destroy her again. Torn between vengeance and a fresh start, Luna must confront her identity. Is she still the Devil of the underworld, or can she find peace in a second chance at life? *****This book contains graphic violence, explicit sexual content, and mature themes that may be disturbing to some readers. It is intended for adult audiences (18+) only.****** ****Discretion is strongly advised.****

Tessa_Q · Urban
Not enough ratings
73 Chs

Heiress' Househusband is a Secret Billionaire

Despite being betrayed by her boyfriend, the neglected heiress Lariette Elsher is still forced to marry him – all because her family wants to appease the fake daughter. The one she was switched at birth with. Screw this! She's done playing nice! Devasted and enraged, Lariette seeks her friend's help – to pick the best man at her butler cafe to be her contracted husband. Enter Ruediger Alvord, infamously known as the poor outcast of the Alvord family, the Elsher's family nemesis. He proposes to be Lariette's partner-in-crime, to wreak havoc in both families. While Lariette is busy getting her revenge, she fails to notice her contracted husband's strange behavior. She also fails to recognize him from a distant past. Before> Ruediger: I have nothing much on my name but, I can be a good househusband. Lariette: It's okay. I can feed you. After> Ruediger: Do you want that house? It's nothing much. Only one billion. Lariette: Aren't you just... a househusband? Since when is her husband a billionaire?! ---------- WSA 2025 Entry Exclusive cover illustration by @khaizusan (Instagram) Font and design by LotusLin We'll have two main couples in this story. Their romance will be shown simultaneously instead of in different volumes :) First: Neglected heiress FL X hidden bigshot ML Second: Returned with a bun FL X groveling husband ML

hansora · Urban
4.8
210 Chs

The Breeding Deal: Brother-in-law's Forbidden Offer

"Please... give me a baby." His eyes cut like sharp blades: "Even if it's with your husband's own brother?" I nod, trembling. To save my dying husband, I would cross any line. What started as a deal spun out of control in the darkness. "Look at me," he grips my chin. "What are you craving?" I shake my head, biting my lip as tears fall. "You want this..." his lips brush mine, "you want me." ———— Twisted relationship alert. The story will contain NSFW contents and slight BDSM. The ratio between NSFW vs. story development is around 4:6. The whole story shall be around 200 chapters. I will mark the explicit chapters with [E] before the title, so you will know (whether you want to skip or read, hehe.) Also, this will be my first book on Webnovel, thanks for your support! * I don't own the cover, I found it on pinterest.

Sky_Hunter23 · Urban
4.7
93 Chs
Login