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crackzero
crackzeroLv55yr
2019-12-31 06:48

Con 16 cap que he leido puedo decir que como historia es interesante,espero que el prota no perfore todo lo que se mueve pero ya se vera,me molesta un poco el como en algunos capitulos los personajes femeninos debatian quien entraria en los pantalones del prota si saben a lo que me refiero y se perdia parte de la atmofera de un mundo apocaliptico,para mi gusto me gustaria mas conflictos internos. si mas que decir las historia esta entretenido y como son varios mundo se puede esperar diferentes desarrollos del prota o fasetas y poderes.

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GenoXX
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GenoXX
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Buenas Gente, aquí el autor Genoxx, primero que nada espero que esta historia sea de su agrado. Como algunos saben, este es mi segundo proyecto y a diferencia de mi primer historia, esta tiene un concepto diferente. Primero que nada, esta vez será un poco más seria, con esto me refiero a que no tendrá tanta comedia o referencias. Puede que hayan algunas de vez en cuando, pero nada más que eso. Segundo, esta dirigida como su nombre indica, a viajar a diferentes mundos, así que será mucho más larga que mi historia anterior, pero al igual que mi primer proyecto, los arcos serán cambiados para que no sea un simple copia y pega con el nombre de mi protagonista editado, sino que serán rediseñados y al igual que en mi historia anterior, me concentraré en desarrollar la interacción entre personajes y no me desviaré tanto de sus respectivas personalidades y si de alguna forma lo hago, lo voy a explicar para que sea lo más razonable posible. Tercero. nuevamente es una historia en español y lo ESPECIFICO desde el título, así que por dios, espero que no venga el subnormal dando Reviews negativas por ser una "Historia en Español en una sección en Ingles". Cuarto, toda crítica es bien recibida, siempre y cuando sea con respeto y tenga sentido, después de todo, eso ayuda a mejorar como escritor. Dicho eso, espero que mi historia sea de su agrado y si les gustó a los nuevos lectores, los invito a leer mi primera historia, muchas gracias... Genoxx fuera

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Zaitro
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Yo leí toda tu primera novela y estuve allí cuando la empezaste, es decir desde el fuckin primer capítulo, disfrute sus más de 290 episodios y todos los extras. Vi como mejoraste como escritor, y estuve allí cuando creaste tu Patreon, aunque nunca done ya que soy menor de edad y sigo siendo mantenido por mis padres :v Estoy aquí para empezar una nueva aventura junto a ti, tu con más experiencia y yo con más expectativas que estoy seguro no serán rotas. Después de todo este comentario me despido de ti GennoXX PD: Iba por aquí buscando un diamante oculto en webnovel y encontré oricalco directo del mundo de Wattpad

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Me gusta el rumbo q toma la novela sobre todo la forma en que ineractuan o se expresan los personajes sin parecer forzado ni distorsionado a su contraparte de sus obras originales es icreible mente bueno y el personaje principal hasta el momento se acopla perfectamente con el mundo , sobre todo la forma en como manejas el momento en la novela dando sentido con explicaciones simples pero efectivas , dato a dicional me parese un fan fic que maneja muy bien los taim skip y los flashback

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Tu historia me ha atrapado desde el inicio. Sigue haciendo un buen trabajo. ................................................................................ .................................... ...................... .............................. ................. ..................................................... ......................................

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vandeliu0631
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Buena historia buenos personajes y buen desarrollo a futuro solo siento que el volumen 2 le falto mas desarrollo en el protagonista la historia y en los personajes de ese mundo no es que estee mal solo que es muy lineal la trama

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LeonToralla
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Excelente novela en español para nosotros , el único pero es que haya escogido al patético de Cloud :v Claro que esto último entra en mi propia opinión personal

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DioSDeLCaoS
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Excelente novela muy bien desarrollado con el potencial de llegar en el top 3,recomendaría q vaya al mundo seirei tsukai no blande dance moshuko tensei

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