Review Detail of Mr_parsa in My Dragon System

This novel has a pretty interesting story so I gave it a read. After reading 70 chapters, this is what I have to say. Keep in mind that this is my personal opinion and some of you may not agree with my point. I can tell that the author is writing what comes to his mind and isn't trying to write something perfect. Although this kind of writing is the most easy and the most fun, it will make some loopholes in the story. And those are the exact things that made me drop it. The characters are pretty good and the dialogues aren't bad. But I felt a lot of small problems that bothered me and that made me drop it. For starters, the MC doesn't feel like an old dragon at all. We weren't given much information about the time that he was a dragon anyway. But still, doesn't act mature at all. Take the hole dragon story away and just say that he was an elf child that lost his hole family to humans and it will still make perfect sense for the most of the story. The point of the story is that he was an old dragon that lost all his friends and family to the humans and fought with them and finally got killed by them. But he just feels like the demon lord loli from some comedy anime if you get what I'm meaning. Of course this gets much better as it goes further so, that's not a big problem. But I have to say, there will be a lot of place that you might think "wait, why didn't he just do this?" or "Wasn't he like this? Then why did he do that?" Or something similar. And one of the things that annoyed me was the so called 'beast form' of his. I think it was a very impractical and stupid idea that I hoped would end after learning Ki and martial arts, but it didn't. If you are like me and things like these annoy you, then this isn't for you. But if you don't care, then this is a pretty good read.