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AshWritesThings
AshWritesThingsLv24yrAshWritesThings

I have been loving this story so much. I mean, at the start, Ray acted like he did as a dragon. But as the story has progressed, he has learned about and felt human emotion. He’s made his own family, and I’m exited to see where this is headed!

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My Dragon System

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I_nobody_
I_nobody_Lv5I_nobody_

He was a retard as dragon just as he was as human. There was no emotion other then anger and stupidly explained other feelings. He made his own family of other retards that were painted to be special and smart but they are just as stupid as the “dragon”.

Caden_Chan
Caden_ChanLv4Caden_Chan

This story is amazing

Caden_Chan
Caden_ChanLv4Caden_Chan

This story is amazing

DaoistmfbjiR
DaoistmfbjiRLv2DaoistmfbjiR

In the beginning it seemed he wouldn’t even act as a dragon I would be reading and completely forget he was a dragon

Little_J8
Little_J8Lv2Little_J8

Dwagon go roar

SayberLynx
SayberLynxLv2SayberLynx

Quite accurate

Poet_Bakerr
Poet_BakerrLv4Poet_Bakerr

I would argue that the story itself is an idea of simplicity, but used in an unothodox fashion that "wows" the reader(s) into a feeling of the extraordinary.

ray_bum
ray_bumLv1ray_bum

Agreed.

Poet_Bakerr:I would argue that the story itself is an idea of simplicity, but used in an unothodox fashion that "wows" the reader(s) into a feeling of the extraordinary.
5U5P3NC3R
5U5P3NC3RLv25U5P3NC3R

Ga Ga Ga, me too

Mamba_Down
Mamba_DownLv14Mamba_Down

I actually disagree with the Grammer issue .it's honestly not bad because it's not Grammer that's ever the issue but occasional misspelling of words. I noticed it looked like the author was using a voice to text service to write the novel and that's why there's misspellings. It's not unbearable at all since the story isn't structured around changlish. Love the book; just wish you could have had the chance to flesh out the ending