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LostSoldier1
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What happens when a dragon who had to watch as all of his kin were killed at the humans' mercy before finally falling himself and being reincarnated as a member of such detestable race? Sen, who convinced himself that he will destroy humanity as revenge, finds himself as part of this complicated species that constantly tests his true intentions. There is the kind and loving family along with agreeable friends on one side, and the rest of the world on another. The once-dragon is stuck in a conundrum where his newfound care for certain individuals is constantly clashing against his ever increasing list of reasons to end humanity, and kindness is losing. The story could have been more well written, as grammar mistakes aren't that rare to find – some repeated so often they make me question whether it is my knowledge of English which is lacking. The story of the world around the protagonist could have been better exposed, and so could the development of the story itself – though I don't particularly have any insightful recommendation for this. Character development is without a doubt the best this story has to offer, everyone has their own qualities and their own thinking, their actions are also always in accordance to their beliefs and absolutely do not need the MC to do anything with their lives. Promising story overall with qualities rarely seen on web novels, plus Sen's moments of senseless arrogance are definitely entertaining!

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JKSManga
JKSMangaAuthorJKSManga

Thank you so much for the detailed review, im glad you are enjoying the story!

Clwxui
ClwxuiLv6Clwxui

Harem?

JKSManga:Thank you so much for the detailed review, im glad you are enjoying the story!
Makurasame
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You are everywhere my dude

EnderPL
EnderPLLv6EnderPL

Thanks for the synopsis. Unfortunately the story sucks. Less dragon more hamster or at least iq of one.

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

The MC Will have a girlfriend/Wife?

JKSManga:Thank you so much for the detailed review, im glad you are enjoying the story!
Daoist819855
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This story is awesome

Daoist819855
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This story is awesome

Mortenlor
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Wow...so in depth

Mortenlor
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Nightcore_6764
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Nice

Nightcore_6764
Nightcore_6764Lv13Nightcore_6764

Nice

TheSecretWriter243
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does he get a girl tho

Medoshi_Senpai
Medoshi_SenpaiLv4Medoshi_Senpai

is there romance or harem? if there's, I'm gonna make this novel the first thing I read In the morning [img=recommend]

feedback
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Hey. Looks like someone stole your story and published it on Amazon. https://***.amazon.com/Dragon-Master-Reincarnated-Drew-Cole-ebook/dp/B08K7KK3W2/ If you want to get the story taken down, you can submit a copyright violation claim as the original copyright holder. there's a link at the bottom of the novel page. Best wishes, Ramon

JKSManga:Thank you so much for the detailed review, im glad you are enjoying the story!
JKSManga
JKSMangaAuthorJKSManga

thanks for letting me know will be trying to.take it down straight away. you are the best

feedback:Hey. Looks like someone stole your story and published it on Amazon. https://***.amazon.com/Dragon-Master-Reincarnated-Drew-Cole-ebook/dp/B08K7KK3W2/ If you want to get the story taken down, you can submit a copyright violation claim as the original copyright holder. there's a link at the bottom of the novel page. Best wishes, Ramon
Derpnerd_114
Derpnerd_114Lv13Derpnerd_114

wow this is a really good review.

Gargor
GargorLv14Gargor

I would guess revenge over anything else.

Babilonja
BabilonjaLv11Babilonja

Exp

AliKarrar_Almasode
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Family novel Oh sh*t

Assiddeeq
AssiddeeqLv2Assiddeeq

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