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Major plot holes in the prologues which is already a red flag. Many more plot holes are in the story and even though the MC wrote the story and characters, he blames them for being rude. Some small grammar problems. It just gets rather boring trying to ignore all the plot holes. And how hypocritical the MC is.

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